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    Post  Blue ace on Thu May 17, 2012 1:46 am

    There once was a group of people. Traveling through the forest and their names where Eternal,Ichihara,and Raven. While they where walking along dirt path they saw three objects. A giant cookie,also pumpkin, then a flower. Eternal pcked up the cookie and ate it while Ihcihara and Raventus inspected the pumpkin. After Eernal finished his cookie he went over to the pumpkin as well. But Eternal noticed there was a face on the pumpkin. The pumpkin said,"I am the pumpkin sage." Then Eternal grabbed his sword and made a jack-o-lantern. The pumpkin sage is no more. Crying or Very sad




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    Post  Blue ace on Sun May 20, 2012 9:29 pm

    Part two written by Eternal (he is awesome)


    After Eternal made the Jack o lantern the flower watched. The flower and pumpkin where both friends. Until Eternal,Ichihara,and Raventus came along that old dusty path. The flowers name was Ichinose-weird name in those times-he was bright and some what a mystery. Once Eternal killed that pumpkin the flower wanted revenge. Soon he was plotting to kill just Eternal, but his plans went wrong. His master plan was to run Eternal over in his SUV. But he got pulled over by a police officer for a DUI. After that he went to prison and now serving 5 years in prison, or is he?!?!? To be continued.....Very Happy
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    Post  Blue ace on Sun May 20, 2012 9:52 pm

    The Master Tree

    Since our encounter with the Flower our three hero's move on. Eternal, Ichihara, and Raventus. As they move down the path thy get deeper into the forest where they see big trees and birds. As they keep walking they run into a river and get a drink of water. But Eternal and Ichihara fail to notice one thing that Raventus had seen. A giant tree, its name is the Master Tree. The Master Tree hates people in his forest. So he engages our three hero's in battle. He fights them with intent killing swinging his roots at them. They all pull there swords out and try to cut the tree but it won work. So they have an idea. How about we chop at the roots of the tree. They try this strategy for it seems like a sound plan but very dangerous because this is the Master Tree only weapon. They find the plan working so they keep cutting the tree roots until the Master Tree said, "enough I am done fighting with you three why are you in our forest." Eternal says," we are just passing by you where the one who attacked us." The master Tree says, "you are right I am sorry...will you be going on your way?" Eternal says, "yes." So our three hero's leave the Master Tree alone and feel triumphant for the day. ~The end....Or is it?!?!?!
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    Post  Blue ace on Mon May 21, 2012 9:28 pm

    Cave Of Darkness ~By Eternal


    While our three hero's continued on there path they decided to stop for a rest. Due to the heat they all decided to rest in this nice cool darkish cave. Eternal made a fire for light in the cave just to light up the room. While Ichihara and Raven are off exploring in the cave. They stumble on a chest. It seemed to be unlocked and had a gold exterior. So they both decided to open it. A beast came out. He had a dark appearance and horn on his head. He is pure evil and has no name. He all the sudden said,"you will die for disturbing my rest." He lashes out at them with his claws, but Ichihara and Raven both dodge in time. They both pull there swords out and start fighting. Soon the evil spirit is to tired out and weak. While he was regaining his breath Eternal lashed at him. After that happened this spirit seemed tro be slayed. But only Ichihara can kill him because he opened the chest. The Spirit says,"fools I am pure evil no one can defeat me." Then Ichihara said,I challenge you. Then they both start fighting. Ichihara cut him. ASfter the spirit was cut he stumbled and Ichihara gave the final attack. The battle was over and our three adventures set out agian on there path. ~Awesomeness stories~
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    Post  Blue ace on Mon May 21, 2012 9:56 pm

    The Young Dragon ~By Eternal


    While our three hero's who are continuing there walk on the path. Something interesting is happening on the side of there path. A huge egg is breaking open. Whats inside this egg is a dragon! This dragon is named Arashi. As Arashi gets out he starts flying. Our three adventures see this and right as Arashi lands they are there. Arashi says,"Hello I am Arashi." They all stand there amazed. Then a group of wolves attack and knock all of our hero's out. But Arashi is fighting them. He is a young dragon and cannot use fire. But he has strong powerful claws. He has only one opponent left. The pack leader,who is huge and strong. He is hurting Arashi . The wolf pack leader is about to deliver the final blow and end Arashi.But suddenly a tornado of fire comes from Arashi and slays the wolf pack leader. Once our three hero's regained consciousness, they could see that Arashi had protected them. They said,"Thank you for protecting us. Then Arashi said,"your welcome but we are even because I can breathe fire." Then Arashi fly high into the sky and hasn't been seen since. ~Awesomeness Stories....YEA!!!
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    Post  Blue ace on Tue May 22, 2012 10:15 am

    The Hidden Power ~By Eternal (Awesomeness Stories)


    We come back to our Three Heroes Eternal,Ichihara, and Raven. They are still walking down the same path. But they all get tired and decided to rest. But while Ichihara and Eternal sleeped, bandits attacked Raven. Raven pulled out his sword and started fighting the three bandits. He had already slayed two, but now only one remains. He seems like there leader, because he is the biggest of them all. He was every strong and put Raven to his limits. While the bandit was about to finish Raven, there was a huge power surge in the air and the bandit fell. After this Raven seemed to be glowing with a orange power that was completely around and and it also changed his sword. Now Ichihara and Eternal woke up and realized what has happened but Raven did not tell them about his secret power. ~Awesomeness Stories...Credits~Raven Ichihara Ichinose Pumpkin Sage Arashi....and the writeer Eternal Smile
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    Post  Unforgiven on Tue May 22, 2012 6:29 pm

    I want to be in this Very Happy ~Aries
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    Post  Blue ace on Tue May 22, 2012 6:51 pm

    Okay sure santa
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    Post  Blue ace on Tue May 22, 2012 7:49 pm

    The Civil War ~By Eternal (Awesomeness Stories).
    While our three heroes are walking down the path trouble is brewing elsewhere in a city called, Daret. The citizens where being treated unfairly by there king. Whose name is Amrael. He is very greedy and doesn't care about his city. As our heroes are walking down there path they find this city. Then after they walk through the city gates they found an inn to rest at. This inn is no ordinary inn. It is full of rebels. While Eternal,Ichihara, and Raven are sitting at a table having a chat a person walks up. He says," Hello my name is Eric." Then he asks," Who is leader of this group." In this group Eternal is regarded as the leader. Eternal says,"I am the leader of the three of us." Eric says," Good will you be taking part in the rebellion." Eternal says,"What rebellion are you talking about?" Eric then said,"The king he thinks of nothing but of himself." Eric then says," You can be rewarded or better yet hold a place in the new government if we win. Eternal says," Okay Ichihara, Raven what do you think?" They both said, sure but not for the rewards but for honor." Eternal then says its decided then Eric we will join your cause, on one term." Eric said, what is this term?" Then Eternal said," You will pay for our stay at this inn and give us supplies when needed." Eric then said," Okay I accept your terms you will soon meet our leader." After this conversation everyone said there goodbyes and went to there rooms and got a good nights rest. ~Awesomeness Stories To Be Continued
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    Post  Blue ace on Tue May 22, 2012 11:42 pm

    The Rebel Leader ~By Eternal

    After our three heroes woke from there sleep at the inn and then walk downs stairs Eric is there. Eric said, great you are awake today you will meet our leader." Then he says,"Follow me we will go to his quarters. All four of them are walking to the cellar of the inn and Eric lifts a barrel and stairs are right there. As they walk down the stairs and then walk down the door they see a door. Eric opens the door and a man is sitting in a chair. This man has a beard he is average looking in height and weight. He stands up and you see a symbol on his shirts right shoulder. It is a a blue dragon breathing red flames. He says,"hello my name is Thor." He also says, " I see you meet my right hand man Eric." Eternal spoke for the group,"Yes, Eric said this war will give as rewards such as money and honor." Thor then said," Yes, if we win. Raven said," Do you have an army?" Eric then said, Yes, about the size of Daret's standing army. Raven said, "What do you want with us,in a mild tone." Thor then said," You will be commanding your own squads." Ichihara said," Why give this position to us you barely even know us." Thor then said, Yes your right, but I bet you know each other very well, and can work quite well together." Eternal said, yes you are quiet right you must be very wise." Thor said, yes I can be." Thor then said Eric get these men outfitted in officer gear and get them each six men." Eric says, yes sir." Then he went out the door. While Thor said, " Now will you please show me your abilities tomorrow in the inn's training center? They all three said, "Yes". Then Thor told them, "Get some good rest." Then dismissed our three heroes. ~(Awesomeness Stories) Razz
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    Post  Hunter Zero[Lain] on Wed May 23, 2012 4:02 am

    This story is really good, I love it, Keep up the good work!
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    Post  Raventus on Wed May 23, 2012 5:55 am

    Nice eternal ^^ Couldn't read it yesterday of course~ Wonder when Ichi will show up with a reply xD
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    Post  Blue ace on Wed May 23, 2012 10:00 am

    Thanks Lain and Raven....yea does Ichihara even have a forum account?
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    Post  Blue ace on Wed May 23, 2012 7:35 pm

    Ability Show ~By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    After our heroes had there talk with Thor and got some sleep they all knew today they had to show there true ability. When all three went down stairs Thor and a escort of guards where sitting at a table. Thor saw them and then said, ah I see you three are awake." Eternal said," Yes and today we are to show our abilities correct?" Thor said", Yes." When they all walk out the door and continue walking our three heroes find themselves behind the inn and there is a big patch of grass. Thor said, Eternal you are the leader of the group, would you please show us your ability first?" Eternal said," Sure, but I warn you I can't control my power completely it can consume me and I turn bad." Thor said, alright." Eternal releases his power and you see a black aura around his body and everyone feels a sad emotion. The wind picks up and they nice day feels somewhat cold. Thor said shocked, alright your power is...powerful." Next Ichihara is up. He releases his power and you see a silver aura around his body. Everyone starts to feel normal but the coldness of the day turns warm. Thor says, great your power is very strong as well." Ichihara acknowledges him and stands by Eternal -who is feeling somewhat sad- now Raven is up. He releases his power an orange glow around him and his sword changes. His sword binds on his wrist and becomes sharper and lighter, while only when he releases it there is a orange dragon running down his sword. Thor said, wow I have never seen a power like that Raven, and your friends to." Who are you people Thor asked. Eternal then spoke for the group, " we are friends who look and help each other out." Thor said well when you return to your rooms you should see your new squad leader uniform." And will also get a squad of four men." After Thor dismisses them Eternal asks" can you give us three horses? Thor then said, sure you will each get a horse tomorrow at the stables then meet me in my office under the cellar with your friends." Eternal said Thank you and see you tomorrow." After our three heroes get to the inn the stay in the inn at the lobby chatting with other people. After the sun started going down they decided to turn in for the night and get some rest. (Awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Blue ace on Fri May 25, 2012 10:38 am

    The Special Meeting ~By Eternal (awesomeness stories)

    After our three heroes woke up and met in the lounge of the inn they went to the inn's stable. In the stables they had for new horses for Eternal,Ichihara,and Raven. The saddle had the same emblem as Thor's leaders outfit. The horses where grand and very expensive. After seeing whose horse was to who they went back into the inn. All three had a bite to eat then went down into the cellar. Walked down the stairs, found the door and went in. Thor said, "Hello, I have a mission for you three today." After this was said Thor's facial expression looked rather tense. Thor then said," you three are going to Fort Ear Twig. Eternal said, okay where is this fort found?" Thor then said, " Just 20 miles North from Daret." There should we no less then 20 guards." Can you handle this task my young friends?" At once they all said, "yes." After this he dismissed him told them all to head out tomorrow. As they headed up back into the end there was some people here with a golden star emblem on their right shoulder. These are men from the king of Daret. While our three heroes go up into there rooms these guards have a drink and leave. But this doesn't escape Eternal, he thinks something suspicious is going on. (Awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Blue ace on Sat May 26, 2012 12:13 am

    The Surprising Mission ~By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    After our three heroes woke up the next day and had breakfast in the inn's lounge, they went outside saddled their horses and rode off North. As they where riding their horses inside of the town Daret they found a couple a places to go, Markets, more inns, stables, armory, etc. As they reached the wall they noticed the guards numbers have been doubled. So the guards and the king must be expecting something. While traveling to Fort Ear Twig they noticed a large caravan going through and farmers with their crops going into Daret to trade. A they reached the fort. They start riding inside the fort and tied the horses to a pole. As they walk inside th fort they notice two guards. Who said nothing just starting to attack. This must be there orders. When they attacked Raven took them out before they started to draw there swords. As thy walk inside they see a huge group of guards -at last 30 guards- this was more than our three heroes had expected. Everything got quiet and the guards started to stare at the intruders. They all draw there swords and Ichihara and Raven jump right into the fighting while Eternal was watching. He was sure something wasn't right. He asked himself, Why would there only be two guards on watch." Then he noticed a huge man at least 6 foot 11 inches. He had a huge great sword. While Raven and Ichihara where fighting, Eternal had to fight him. All the guards yell its moose.(Our readers can understand why they call him moose because of how big he is) He drew his sword and started engaging in combat. He had Eternal beat in stregth and there swordsmanship was about matched. But Eternal had him a big advantage because of his speed,and intellect. While Moose started jabbing at Eternal. Eternal quickly slashed him in the gut. While this happened it seems moose cannot move his left hand. Now Eternal goes in and gives the final slash, and this sends moose to the ground. As this happened the guards seemed to get discouraged. But there own numbers overwhelm Ichihara, and Raven. When Eternal sees them both get knocked unconscious Eternal loses control. ~Sorry to keep you in suspense lol but this is how it will be xD (Awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Blue ace on Sat May 26, 2012 1:19 am

    Eternal's Power ~By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    While Ichihara, and Raven lay unconscious on the ground, Eternal became unstable. His black power roared up into the ceiling. He lost complete control of himself. Then the guards started to run towards Eternal with there swords. But as this happens he run towards all the guards and they all drop dead. He killed them all in a flash. While Eternal is going crazy Ichihara and Raven woke up. While they woke up they see this on his body. A bone like mask and armor. And they see these black blasts of power coming from his mask. His eyes has turned black and then he didnt't seem like Eternal at all. He headed for Ichihara and Raven. He drew his sword which was longer and had a circle -which was red- on the hilt of the sword. His sword was black and red mixed. Raven and Ichihara drew there swords for fear this wasn't Eternal. And they where right. He started running toward them in a flash and the red blasts came from his mask again. So Ichihara and Raven knowing they where at a disadvantage, they both activated there powers. As this happened Eternal rushed at them with his sword but they both dodged. While Raven rushes at Eternal and cuts him a little in the shoulder. As this happened Ichihara hit Eternal's mask with his hilt breaking it. After this happened all of Eternals' power retreated back into him and his armor was gone. Now that the fort was taken they put Eternal on his horse and rode back into town. When they get into the inn Ichihara and Raven put him in his bed and lets him rest. Meanwhile Ichihara and Raven go into the cellar, and down the stairs to have a talk with Thor. (Awesomeness stories)....Razz
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    Post  Blue ace on Sat May 26, 2012 10:04 pm

    The Talk ~By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    While Eternal rested in his room at the inn Raven and Ichiara went into the cellar, down the stairs to see Thor. As they see thor they tell him, We have gotten rid of the guards at the fort. After we said this Thor rang a bell and Eric came. Thor then said, Eric go and dispatch 1,000 men to for Ear Twig. Eric said, Yes and then walked away." After we told him how Eternal killed moose. He asked how many guards where there? Raven then said," 30." Thor said, you three killed all of them?" Ichihara then said," Actually Eternal did. Thor shocked asked," How is it possible for him to kill 30 people?" Raven then said, We where knocked unconscious for awhile during battle. After Eternal killed Moose he went crazy and his dark power consumed him. After Ichihara made a described account of what Eternal looked like Thor was shocked. Thor then asked can I see him. Raven then said, "No he is recovering from our mission. Thor then said," Here this is a gift to him, in it is 300 hundred coins each.Give this to Eternal. Raven then said, Okay I will. Thor then got up and said, your gift will be a free diner tonight on me in the inn. After Thor dismissed them and Raven and Ichihara walk back into the inn's lounge, Ravens says, I am gonna go up and put this in Eternals room. So Raven walks up the stairs and puts the coin bag on his dresser. But he noticed Eternal black power was healing him. Then Raven leaves the room and goes into the inn's lounge and has dinner with Ichihara. He also makes sure Eternal gets his share of dinner so he has the inn's owner bring dinner up to him. As Raven and Ichihara finish eating they go into their rooms and sleep. But Eternal when he wakes up he walks and sees in a mirror that his power have gave him a new look.....(Awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Blue ace on Sun May 27, 2012 1:31 am

    The New look By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    As Ichihara and Raven where sleeping, Eternal woke up and looked into the mirror. As he looked he noticed changes in his appearance. His eyes where black. His hair was longer and covered his eyes. His hair color was silver. He felt that he didn't have to sleep. so as a result, he grabbed his sword and went out into a field to practice his abilities. The moon that night was full and very bright so he could see. As he pulled his sword out he activated his powers. His sword is now long and its color is black with a silver dragon with red eyes on it. The star emblem vanished and whats there is a skull that is black and silver. There is a chain that runs up on Eternal's arm as well. When he activated his power a black color outlined his body and the plants around him started to die. As a result he had full control over his powers and deactivated them. So he went back into the inn got in his bed and tried to sleep. But it seemed pointless. So he faked being asleep. Then the next day came and he didn't feel tired at all he just walked into the inn's lounge and had breakfast and waited for Raven and Ichihara. As they walked in they where shocked at how Eternal looked. So he told them what happened. He also asked why there was gold coins in his rooms Raven explained they where from Thor as a gift. So they all finished breakfast and headed out the inn to explore Daret. They found a marketplace and a good inn to have food in and guilds. They also saw the king's palace. It was almost lunch time so they walk back into the inn have lunch then go to the cellar, down the stairs to have another talk with Thor. And they also went to see if he has any assignments for him. Since there has been talk about a final battle for Daret. (Awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Blue ace on Sun May 27, 2012 2:31 am

    The Battle beginning ~By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    When our three heroes walk into Thor's room they find to people there. A man name Taka and another Alexie. Thor said, "Hello my friends this is Lieutenant Alexie. We where just discussing fort Ear Twig. Then he paused and asked, is that Eternal? He said with a puzzled look. Eternal said, Yes. Then he went on and told Thor what happened last night. As he went on he said to Alexie and our three heroes, I have a mission for you all. Soon we will be preparing for our last battle to take Daret. You four will have to find a way to open the Main gate south from here tomorrow at 12 noon. So after this Thor dismissed them and Eternal told Ichihara and Raven he would be busy. So Eternal left the inn with the coin. He bought a bow and arrow. He then went outside the city walls into the forest and went hunting. As he saw a deer he took it down with his bow. He then took the deer to the inn keeper and sold it to him for 20 golden coins -Because it was a good size deer and the meat was fresh- Then he gave Ichihara and Raven each 10 coin. And told them to go eat or gamble it. After this night was falling so Ichihara and Raven went to bed. While Eternal still up and doesnt feel tired goes on top of the inn's roof and looks at the stars. Waiting for tomorrow. Meanwhile Alexie at his own house is sleeping and going to meet our three heroes in the morning at the inn. (Awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Blue ace on Sun May 27, 2012 10:57 pm

    The Open Gate ~By Eternal (Awesomeness stories)

    The next day, Eternal is waiting with Alexie in the inn's lounge. While they have breakfast they see Ichihara and Raven walking down the stairs to have breakfast. As they have breakfast they both sit at the same table as Alexie and Eternal without saying a word just eating. As all four of them finish breakfast they go to the inn's stables. Saddle their horses. And ride off towards the main gate. As they reach the gate they notice a squad of 4 troops. Also a team of 2 archers in both of the towers. So Ichhara and Raven stay where they are to fight the squad of guards while Eternal and alexie run up the stairs where both the mechanism to open the gate is and the archers are. As Ichihara and Raven finish off the guards they stand watch of the two towers making sure no one interferes. A;exie who is already up the tower and killed the archer is waiting for Eternal to get up to the other tower. Because the gate will only open if both towers pull the levers. But in this cause they are gonna break the levers so the gate stays open. As Eternal is just up at the top the archer is about to fire an arrow at Alexie. But Etrernal knocked him out before he fired it. So both Alexie and Eternal pull the levers then jams them down so the gate stays up. Then they all get back on their own horses and ride towards the inn as fast as they can. So they can tell Thor the gates are ready. As they get to the inn. They all jump off their horses and run through the down to the cellar and find Thor to tell him. All Thor does is ring and then give a silent command to Eric. Eric bows then leaves. After this Thor said prepare for battle tomorrow. Eternal is going to lead the charge into Daret and will capture the palace.
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    Post  Blue ace on Tue May 29, 2012 9:43 pm

    The Battle for Daret ~Eternal (awesomeness stories)

    After the gate was open and Thor had been informed he met our three heroes and Alexie outside the gate with his army of 30,000 men. As they march into the town of Daret conflicts start to happen. Daret's army is only 20,000 strong. So Amrael has his forces guarding his palace. While Thor's army gets closer to the palace, things start getting more intense for the soldiers who have never entered battle. As they are all outside of the gate Eternal and Raven jump the gate while there troops. Eternals group take out the soldiers outside guarding , while Ravens team move inside. As this happens Thor's army is engaged with Daret's army. While the two armies are fighting Eternal's team regrouped with Raven's. So they rush into the Kings hall. As Ravens team takes out all the guards Eternal is engaged with Amrael. As Eternal is fighting Amrael seems winning. Since Eternal has no choice he has to activate his powers. As this happens he starts glowing black. Amrael who is seeing this seems to fear Eternal's power. Eternal who delivers the last strike to Amrael. Then Amrael falls to the ground dead. As this happens Daret's army is losing. As they only have 5,000 troops left they all flee. Daret is now under control by the rebels and will be put back into order. The economy of the town should prosper as well. But who will be leader Thor or Eternal? This is what will be the next conflict and might tear friendships apart. (awesomeness stories)
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    Post  Snoopie on Tue May 29, 2012 10:44 pm

    excellent sotry Eternal. you have inspired me to start a story of my own. keep up the good work.
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    Post  Blue ace on Wed May 30, 2012 12:28 am

    Thanks...
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    Post  Blue ace on Wed May 30, 2012 9:17 pm

    Chapter 2
    The War Is Over ~Eternal

    Two weeks later, Daret has no ruler. Eternal is with his friends and with Thor at meetings to decide the new king. Raven and Ichihara practice training. Now that Eternal, Ichihara and Raven are famous everyone in Daret knows them, and their words carry power as well. Now that Eternal and Raven and Ichihara are living in Daret they no longer stay at the inn. They all got their own reward. With this reward the bought a house, horses, and all three of them own the inn they stayed at. And the inn is called, The Path. Which is ironic because of the path they traveled to get to Daret. Eternal is going to the final meeting where the two finalists are going to be elected as king. The terms of this elecetion are the winner gets to choose the next governor and two generals. Eternal seems to have the favor of the voting crowd. Since he slayed Araemal in battle. The other finalist is Thor only one person hasn't voted yet. It is Raven. Now as the session is in. Raven stands there thinking that he is going to vote for Eternal. But will he? As Raven put his vote in, they counted votesa and Eternal won. He is now King Eternal of Daret. He doesn't want a holiday to make him king. He justs accepted it and is going to make Daret a great power and with a great economy. (For the people that read my stories, I am thinking about ending them due to I think they arent good) Awesomeness stories O.o

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